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In A Riddle
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 08-08-2001

Age Rating: 1 to 127

Inspired by "Is there anybody there?"
by David Taub

Like a riddle
...............in a puzzle
..............................in a maze,
It's so true that mankind
is confused these days
They don't know which end is up
or which way's down
Not knowing how to please "GOD"
they seem to make him frown
If they'd only get to know him
they would surely see
That his perfect love for us
was meant for you and me
Then they'd stop their fighting
stop their many wars
They'd get the gift of life
and all "HE" has in store
Instead the "God" of many
remains this day unpraised
Like a riddle
...............in a puzzle
..............................in a maze...

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05-28-2007 Leigh G.

How interesting! Not what I expected at all, so I found that an appealing factor in this piece! I was hoping you'd incorporate the word "labyrinth" though. :) I had a poem titled labyrinth, but I didn't want to submit it because I wanted by 100th poem to have more impact and meaning. Although you had it set up where the lack of capitalization was...well, justified I think that made this piece read a little awkwardly. Good work, keep writing.

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03-02-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut

Yes it would be better if... Then what would heaven be for? This is a great poem. Thanks, Anthony

11-01-2003 Dawn Staple

Well done! DAWN in UK

04-01-2001 Eric Carrillo

hi, that was a good poem. And very true. Perhaps, some day this world will be come a better place.

04-01-2001 John Mcleod

An excellent poem Mary, if everyone took note of your words and learned to know him and know what he stands for and what he has done for us, then perhaps this world would be better.

jm

04-01-2001 John C.

thank's baby doll.. ;)

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In A Riddle by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38) copyright 08-08-2001 Age Rating: 1 to 127

In A Riddle
by Mary -BrytEyz- Ball (Age: 38)
copyright 08-08-2001

Age Rating: 1 to 127