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What's Up With That?
by M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld (Age: 54)
copyright 05-01-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
You'll drive me away,
With the things that you say
about being useless,
and getting old and gray,
What's up with that?

You tell me to look for a younger man,
But I love you, and I don't understand
why you feel this way while
doing the best that you can! What's up with that?

I think that it's a thing called pride,
you feel that you cannot provide
the life you want for me.
Did I ask you to provide?
What's up with that?

We're partners in the game of life,
I do not need to be you wife,
coddled and protected, spoiled
and kept away from daily strife!
What's up with that?

You know that I love you, hon
and what needs be is getting done
and so, I say, that we have won,
and that's what's up with that!


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04-20-2005 Mary -BrytEyz- Ball    

Hey there, I really like this and can't believe I never read it before. I could have SWORN I read all your posts before. Well, I'm terribly sorry for missing it and hope you know I find your work intriguing. Sometimes it's fun, sometimes it's insightful...and sometimes it's both! :-)
03-24-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

This is a great write only one typo in the second to last verse you say, " I do not need to be you wife" I think you ment, "your" This was a fun read though, Anthony
05-03-2003 Christopher Doss    

Actually that is one of my favorite things to say except it comes out more like..
What up? lol....nice write
05-01-2003 Janet Owenby    

Excellant work Bunny
05-01-2003 M.E. (Bunny) Eastveld    

Thank you very much for your comments and recommends. It's good to be back, in print as well as in spirit! I tried to move the last line of the second stanza, but couldn't get it to stay "in line" with the rest of the stanzas. Will have to work more on computer skills, and get it right.
Bunny
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