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Those Empty Eyes
by Riley M. (Age: 16)
copyright 05-01-2003


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**Dedicated to my sick little brother Tommy**


You can sense inside those empty eyes,
A pain we cannot testify,
Just an ounce would make you cry,
Looking into those empty eyes.

And as he stares ahead forlorn,
You feel his rhythm being torn,
He's no longer that blissful child,
For now he lay solemnly mild.
His health you crave to restore,
To heal the wounds that are sore,
But it's not in your power to administer such,
This is his fight, although you wish much,
That you might be a steadfast cure,
To those empty eyes that must endure,
The hardships of that sickening pain,
Those empty eyes with blotted tearstains.

You can sense inside those empty eyes,
A pain we cannot testify,
Just an ounce would make you cry,
Looking into those empty eyes.


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10-24-2005 Kimberly Angelone    

I have a brother and I love him very much. I am so sorry your brother is sick. What is wrong, may I ask? Sounds serious. I hope all works out in your favor. Great emotional write!
05-11-2003 Gregory Christiano    

Great job in empathizing with your sick bother. Well expressed. You could almost feel his pain. You certainly have that flair for poetic expression.
05-07-2003 Nguyen Tran Q.    

I don't have a brother, but I have a friend and she is allergic to eggs. Sometime, when she eat eggs, she got a high fever, and cannot move for 2 hours.
i hope that your brother is felling better now.
05-06-2003 Christopher Doss    

This sounds like me when I'm hungry..lol
Seriously though, very nice write
05-03-2003 Brianne Boychuk    

I think your poem was excellent but it was soo sad. I know how u feel, my little brother was allergic to milk and eggs and before we knew bout his allergies he would sesure and get extremely high fevers and be in the hospital for days. I hope ur lil brother feels better soon and hope it all turns out good in the end.
05-02-2003 Regina S.    

lol, i know how u feel every time my brother comes down with something he misses a whole week of shool and then passes it on to me, xept i can barely afford to miss one day of school! Feel batter soon!^-^
05-02-2003 Riley M.    

actually he is, he's up and running again^-^ but now i think IM sick lol
05-02-2003 Regina S.    

*Sniff* This is so sad! Beautiful poem, Riley, Hope your brother feels better soon. ^-^
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