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The Morning
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 05-27-2003


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  The Morning
Picture Credits:

The birds flew against the sky
They felt so high
The sky felt the birds early wakenings
I wokeup
The sky looked so high
With it's beautiful choice of color
The morning is what nobody likes
But it looks so beautiful
It's almost real

It's a new morning
Everyone's happy
Dad's are cleaning their cars
Mom's are cleaning the house
Plus complaining about it
I stay outside
And hear the birds
My brother plays
His video games

the morning
is so boring
Especially during
Health or
Writing class

The morning is okay
when it's silent
And people are playing silently
Nobody is hyper
Or crazy and wild


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04-25-2006 Richard Reed Jr    

Another good emotional write. I'm starting with your earliest pieces to see how far you have come?
One idea. What do you think of making poetry sound like music, with the same steady and consistent beat in each line?

I just loved this:

The morning is okay
when it's silent
And people are playing silently
Nobody is hyper
Or crazy and wild


See ya' soon,

Rich
09-11-2005 Haley S.    

kitten It's me Haley I just wanted to say hi
03-05-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

The only people that don't like mornings are the ones that haven't watched a sunrise with the one they love. It can be a very moving experence! Thanks, Anthony
05-28-2003 Elizabeth Baldwin    

Very nice.. needs little work.. nicely done!!
05-27-2003 Regina S.    

Nice write!
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