by my side
by
Travis Bauer
(Age: 21)
copyright 05-27-2003
Age Rating: 13 to 127
There are days I could cry.
And then there were days I could die.
What keeps me alive, is your pretty smile.
The days that I cry are the days I hope that you'll be there by my side.
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Passion from within, expressed in words without forced emotion is truly a delight. I can honestly say that I eagerly anticipate reading each and every one of your works. What a treasure, what value, what passion... very unexpected from someone of your age and gender. You do your sex credit. Keep it up.
My only suggestion is this... the first line (there are days I could cry) seems to encompass past, present, and future time. However, the second line (and then were days I could die) seems to only encompass the past. I think it would be better if both lines agreed in this area. Other than that... short and sweet... thank you.
I would agree with Leah. NO guys at my school would EVER say anything like this. Though I never understand why a guy wont. I mean it isnt like a bad thing to say or anything. Good job!
this is spectacular...
I can't believe a guy wrote this. not because I don't think guys can, but because so often they won't admit this to anyone. and you are ever so expressive...
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