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Extinct stars

by Irina Guschina (Age: 59)
copyright 05-17-2003


Age Rating: 18 +

Haiku

Love came here to stay
In all endless starry nights.

You stole away…






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        05-25-2003     Gregory Christiano        

Beautifully expressed as always!

        05-19-2003     Lyle Berry        

Your expression is very beautiful. The Haiku needs one more syllable in lines one and three to achieve 5-7-5. Suggest:

Love came here to stay,
in all endless starry nights.
You stole it away…


Warm Regards,
Lyle



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