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Suicide
by Liz Cozens
copyright 05-20-2003


Age Rating: 13 to 127

 
I know you think you want to die.
That is your choice
So I won’t ask why.
But have a thought for those who find
The body that you leave behind.
Don’t choose a place where kids can see
How you end your misery.

They don’t deserve the memory.


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01-11-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

poignant message! This is something that causes deep thought! Do people that commit suicide think about who finds them and do they care? Yhanks, Anthony
09-08-2003 Jenny Stein    

it has my thumbs up. but i dont condone suicide.. i just like your writing. a deep scratch to the many dead layers of my heart. it has reached it .
05-27-2003 Liz Cozens    

Thanks for your comments, Regina i like the line you have suggested and will change.

thanks all

L
05-24-2003 Riley M.    

deep and complex....kids, dont try this at home! lol, the suicide i mean...
05-21-2003 Moses Hochstetler    

Very good, Liz! You cut to the heart of the matter. A short poem with a great deal to say.
05-21-2003 Regina S.    

Great job, and I like your thought 9that people who are suicidal shouldn't only think about themselves).
BTW. I know your kinda (very) picky about your structure, but maybe in the almost last line you could end it "how you end your misery" ? n_n (just a suggestion)
05-20-2003 Nancy Pawley    

Liz, welcome to PnP. A very good start with your first posting here.
NAncy
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