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The Girls Who Found What They Were
Chapter 4:Princess Patience
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 05-21-2003


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  The Girls Who Found What They Were
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Aliese was looking out the window. It was a rainy day. I was playing video games. Kelsey was watching telivision. With her dog, Coal on her lap. Luna was watching me play. When I lost I sighed.
Luna said,"Your just like Serena, play video games non-stop."
I shutoff the game and said,"Ok what's up? Something is wrong. Is it the rain?"
Luna said,"No, found a new princess!"
I said excitedly,"WHO!"
Luna said,"Her name is Aliese, and she is Princess Patience."
I said,"Oh my god! REALLY!"
Luna said,"Yes that's right, Caitlin."
I screamed with joy. Then, called Kelsey. Kelsey was also excited.
She said,"I still wonder about the starlights."
I replied,"Me too!"
Kelsey said,"Can I come over?"
I said,"Sure."
When I waited at the bus stop for Kelsey to come. A strange flash of yellow flew against the sky except marking from the light stayed on my umbrella except red. Also, Sailor Mars appeared above it.
Sailor Mars said,"Help, you are the second Sailor Mars. Kelsey is the second Sailor Moon. Aliese is the second Sailor Venus. Help before the rest and I die."
Sailor Mars died and the marking was gone.
Aliese and Kelsey appeared.
Aliese said,"Ok explain to me why I have these powers?"
Kelsey and I told us what Luna said.




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04-06-2006 Leigh G.    

Not too bad. The lack of descriptions is still present, it's too fast going, short, and you need to fix grammar desperately. All in all, you've got a really good idea going here. Even though is Venus really famous for patience? ^-^ Keep writing, I'm off to the next chapter!

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