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The Girls Who Found What They Were
Chapter 5:Shard Battle
by Caitlin M. (Age: 16)
copyright 05-22-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

  The Girls Who Found What They Were
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Then I added what happned to my umbrella.Kelsey and Aliese were afraid. I then told Aliese about the diary entry. She was sad of what the entry said. We saw Luna in a very far distance.We told Aliese about Luna.
Aliese said,"Cool, a talking cat."
Luna arrived and said,"My name is Luna, you are Princess Patience. To have your powers you scream"Princess Waiting Patience."
A badguy was by us. The rain stopped. It was a girl this time. She had long, blue hair. A red skirt to her kneecaps. And a white shirt with a black moon on it.
She said,"I am Cheryl, your friend."
I said,"What?"
She held my hand. The moon appeared, it's light shone on my hand. Aliese tried to stop her but she fell.
Kelsey screamed,"PRINCESS SPEEDING POWER!"
Aliese's mind-Hey that's it. I have to scream Princess Waiting Patience.
Aliese screamed while still on the floor,"PRINCESS WAITING PATIENCE!"
Aliese got up fromt the floor.
Aliese and Kelsey said,"Stay away from our friend!"
Cheryl said,"Too late!"
A black moon formed on my head. Luna threw the shard to Kelsey. Kelsey grabbed it carefully.
She hollered,"What do I do?"
I screamed and was stuck on a mirror.
Luna quickly yelled,"Kiss it and yell power!"
Kelsey kissed the shard and yelled,"POWER!"
Cheryl put a small mirror in front of me. She had to look inside to steal my power.
The place turned so light. The sky turned yellow.
Cheryl had fallen, she held her shoulder and was hurt.
I was off the mirror and said,"NO, CHERYL!"
A tear of mine fell on her. Her black moon disapearred and formed into a regular moon like the rest.
Luna said,"WHAT!" then said,"THE SHARD DIDN'T WORK!!"
Cheryl hadn't felt a thing.
Luna said,"Girls, Cheryl is the first sailor starlight."
We nodded, and Cheryl made a scared look.
She said,"My sister is heading this way, hand me the shard."
Kelsey gave her the shard. Cheryl turned around and took the other shard. Which was from herself.
I said,"What are you doing?!"
Cheryl said,"Give me your wands."
We gave her our wands. Aliese gave her a medium size wand.
Cheryl said,"Sorry, Aliese take your wand back."
She put a shard in Kelsey's wand. The other in mine.
Fish-Eye appeared and said,"I'm Fish-Eye, try to defeat me."
Kelsey and I yelled,"MOON GORGOUES MEDITATION!"
Fish-Eye was defeated and Cheryl put a shard in Aliese's wand.
Luna said,"Good job!"




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04-06-2006 Leigh G.    

Not bad... It's too short, a bit confusing, and you really need to fix the grammar and the spelling. You're improving and this chapter is longer, you also added some descriptions, which I'm glad about. Well, so I don't annoy you with my rantings about grammar and the like I'll stop here....l I'm off to the next chapter, you're improving, keep writing.

May the divine darkness be with you,
Leigh of the Commenting Crusaders


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