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Once Friends
by Haley Thistle (Age: 19)
copyright 05-23-2003


Age Rating: 10 to 127

 
At first we were friends
Ones to depend
We never thought about love
Or even a relationship
Never even crossed my mind
But one day as we grew
I suddenly knew I was in love
...with you

It's hard to say exactly why
I don't even want to try
We were once friends
Even to the end
I protected you
And you protected me
But how can this be?
I'm in love with you
...my deepest friend

All the times we laughed
And shared the same tears
I never thought about love
Not even once, not since three
But then we grew up and we began to see
We were in love
Since three


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10-04-2005 Anthony Lane Stahlhut    

In love sense three? Maybe you just were pulled together by fate. Love does grow over time so I guess this could happen, but in love at three sounds funny to me! I must be a poet too, to write this to you! Anthony
06-23-2003 Meagan Shafer    

i like your poem....it shows how friendship can turn into love and it shows emotion and feeling
05-26-2003 Cleao Kavanagh    

Well they say the best couples are friends to begin with! I really like this poem, It's just really sweet! :)
05-25-2003 Regina S.    

Wow, (lol)-.- you just proved my friends theory that a guy and a girl can never be just friends!! But that is soooooooo not true I like the guys I'm friends with, when a guy becomes your boyfriend you can't do normal things like play pranks on each other or tease or wrestle them (i'm a total tomboy) ^-^ Great poem!! (let's just hope my friend never reads this or she'll bug me about it for months!!)
05-23-2003 Riley M.    

i liked it ^-^ very nice, but you may want to change the last line so that the conclusion really sticks, like maybe

'We were in love
You and me'

or something, i dunno, it just kinda fits better with 3 syllables and you should aviod resusing words

i think its really good though! keep up the good work!

^-^ Riley
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