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I empathize-- my boyfriend left me on Valentine's Day! That sucked. Interesting rhyme scheme you've chosen, it works very well! My recommendation is play around with the words-- you clearly have an amazing command of the language for such a young age (how many thirteen year olds know how to properly use the word "fare"? I didn't when I was that age). When you fiddle with it, you can find words that add to the rhythm, making it a bit more melancholy and really enhancing the emotion your trying to portray. Very good, though, I give it a three.
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