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A Cherry Is Ripe

by Irina Guschina (Age: 58)
copyright 05-26-2003


Age Rating: 13 +

(Haiku)

A cherry is ripe.
On the one lonely blue bench
Is one cherry trace.






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        02-19-2005     Lisa Anderson        

A cherry is one of my favorite summer time treats! Great write.

        05-30-2003     Regina S.        

Great hiaku! And beautiful imagery.

        05-28-2003     Lyle Berry        

A perfect ten from me. A cherry would taste sinfully sweet right now, since I am on a high fat and protein diet. LOL!

Warm Regards,
Lyle

        05-26-2003     Gregory Christiano        

A lot to think about here. As always, very nice Irina.

        05-26-2003     Moses Hochstetler        

Irina: I always love to read your Haiku's. Keep it up. Perhaps sometime this week I will submit some of mine. Moses

        05-26-2003     Christopher Doss        

Excellent

        05-26-2003     Albert Russell        

Irina,
I don't know much about haiku other than the syllable count, but I love the imagery conveyed in your poem. A wonderful story told in few, but well-chosen, words. Excellent.



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