Racing a white Unicorn
Healing a dragon that was cut and torn
Kissing a magical prince
I was able to fly ever since
Holding a moon beam in my hand
Mermaids lying on the glittery sand
Flying up into the black sky
Smelling a rose, hearing the wind cry
Hatred shattered by a single tear
A single kiss that eased my fear
Being the princess of the midnight sky
Hear the waves of the ocean sigh
Then when sunrise spilled its light
I took one last look then I flew off into the night
Then I woke up in the sun's rays
All of my memories are in a haze
I found a familer rose on my chest
It was just a dream I guessed
I went to my balcony over the ocean called gleam
Then a prince I'v seen before took my hand and we flew away into the moon's beam
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Only a couple of changes and this would flow a lot better. Your poem is wonderful anyway, but change a couple of lines and this goes much farther! Good write anyway, Anthony
ok the rhythm needs to be steadied, you can just add more syllables or cut some to fix that tho! i think that your rhyme is amazing, you have that down pat, which really adds that whimsical feel to the poem! over all good job